“I saw three ships come sailing by,
Come sailing by, come sailing by;
I saw three ships come sailing by,
On New Year's Day in the
morning.”
It
was in the wee hours of the morning that I saw three ships come sail by. I was on my way home from celebrating the
fact that a New Year had started when I saw them. I had been pondering what this New Year would
bring my surroundings, and me so when I saw the three ships I wondered if this
was what the New Year was transporting to me, I immediately became interested
with the ships and waited for them to come ashore.
(Three ships-Google)
This
New Year’s Day was cold with winds as strong as Chicago’s. So as I patiently waited there, hoping that
maybe one of these ships had sunshine and warmth. But that couldn't possible be everything that
lay upon these ships, what more could there be?
Could
there be happiness with dancing? Or rain and sadness, oh I hope not! The ships
got closer and closer, if I squint my eyes I could maybe make something out of
them. I squinted as tight as I could to
try and make something out, but still couldn't figure it out.
The
morning was coming to an end and I had missed breakfast, therefore I was hungry
for lunch, I have never heard my stomach growl so loudly. I then wished for food to be on one of the ships. A ship full of fruit would be so tasty, or
even better a ship full of sweats to take care of my sweat tooth for the
year.
The
closer and closer the ships got the bigger they appeared to be. What if there are giant animals to be brought
for the New Year. Animals like elephants that we could ride to get from place
to place.
“And what do you think was in them then,
Was in them then, was in them then?
And what do you think was in them then,
On New Year's Day in the
morning?”
My
excitement was overflown as the ships started to reach land. I just couldn't wait to see what would come
off, to start the New Year with. The
ships landed one right after another.
The first ship had mounds of wood and paint on it, the second had any
type of tool you might use for all that wood and paint. The third ship had one man on it; I asked him
what is it you are going to do with all this wood and paint? And he told me
that he is going to start fresh and use the tools to create a new life, and
then he asked me to join him. Of course I said yes, as New Year equals new
beginnings.
Author’s
Note. This story strays away from the original nursery rhyme “Three pretty
girls were in them then”. The original
rhyme ends with three women on the ships that each contains different talents,
whistling, singing, and playing the violin.
I decided to look more at the fact that the rhyme talked about a New
Year, and I wanted to incorporate that a New Year can bring new possibilities. I also wanted to point out that your options
are endless when wanting a fresh start, the person in the story never stopped
imaging what could be on those ships, and I believe that showed hope for a new
beginning.
Bibliography. This story is based on the nursery rhyme
“Three pretty girls ere in them then” on The Nursery Rhyme Book edited by
Andrew Lang
I also love the theme of New Years and new beginnings – perfect timing! I enjoyed the vivid description of “winds as strong as Chicago’s” and your loud stomach growl as well as the imagery of a ship full of fruits and/or sweets. I had never heard this nursery rhyme before reading it on your blog but it sounds really beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI definitely agree with Ashlyn. This is a great story for a new semester, and I like how you took the theme of new beginning and used it to make the story your own. I also like how you did the whole thing in first person. It gives me a feeling of suspense and excitement for what might come next as I'm reading along.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ashlyn and Bill. New Years and new beginnings was a great theme for the start of the semester. Also, your first person point of view created a great tone, and suspense. I wanted to know what was in the boats. My only criticism was that the story felt old, like it was from an older time period, especially when I found out what was in the boats. I don't know if that was your goal, so if it wasn't, maybe be aware of that with your next story and try to modernise it--IF that is what you are aiming for. If you were aiming for it to sound like it was taking place in an older time, then you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteAnyways, overall, great job, I enjoyed reading this.