Orange Cancer
There once was a man named Fitz who had a very strange type of skin
cancer that turned his skin orange. Fitz and his mother lived in the
valley with mountains sounding them. When Fitz was born there were no
signs of his skin cancer. It wasn't until he was six years old that
he saw his first orange spot. After his mother tried over and over again
to scrub it off in the bath she knew it must have been a birthmark that had
just formed. It wasn’t until Fitz was eight that he got his second orange
spot, but this time it was much bigger. Fitz’s mother got concerned so
she took him to the doctor, but that was no help because the doctor had no clue
to why his skin was slowly turning orange. Fitz went to doctor after
doctor searching for an answer to why his skin was turning orange. By the
time Fitz was twelve he had seen nine different doctors, taken hundreds of
test, and worst of all almost all of his legs were turned orange. Fitz
was embarrassed of his orange skin, and tried to keep it covered as much as possible. He only wore jeans so that his orange legs
stayed covered, and wore all long sleeves shirts once his arms started to
become more orange. Fitz hated wearing
so many clothes just to cover up his skin, sometimes it was extremely hot
outside and he still wore clothes to cover his skin. On Fitz’s 15th birthday
he got a call from a doctor saying he knew how to help him. Fitz and his
mother meet with this doctor to find out that there was a cure for him.
The only catch was that the cure was in a special aloe plant at the top of the
highest mountain. With this plant Fitz will have to squeeze out all the
aloe and rub it into his skin to cure the cancer. Fitz set out to hike this
mountain, and by the time he reached the top his whole body was almost orange, his
head was the only thing that hadn’t turned orange. It took Fitz 4 years to
climb the highest mountain, but he never gave up, all he had to do was look at
his orange skin to motivate him to keep going. Once Fitz reached the top he
found the aloe and immediately started rubbing it all over his body, and the
orange started to disappear. It had been 14 years since Fitz got his
first orange spot and now he will be orange free for the rest of his life.
Bibliography: The source from this story of Public Edition: RamayanaPart D.
Hi again Sarah,
ReplyDeleteThis story was really fun to read. I liked that you kept the idea of Rama's exile in this story but made it 100% your own. I couldn't imagine having orange skin! Must have been scary for Fitz. My only suggestion is made breaking the story up into paragraphs. I think it would make it easier for the reader. Overall, you did a great job! :)
Sarah,
ReplyDeleteThis is very creative story and easy to understand, which I really like. I wonder if the cancer or orange skin hurts at all or maybe itches. I couldn’t imagine hiking for four years, that would be so miserable. I like the picture of the aloe plant and come to think of it I don’t think I’ve ever seen one. Great job on the story and thanks for the great read!